Self evaluation of my final draft (1)

After todays lesson I rendered my video calling it my final draft after today because I have been adding some of filters and adding some more clips and now I have looked through the video to see what needs to be improved.

1. The first low angle shot at 15 seconds, the filter could be improved.
2. Need to lower the volume of the song to make it not as overpowering because when it is higher volume the visual image doesn't have the same effect .
3. Look at some of the video clip and maybe make them shorter because it seem like its showing to much of the clip and he starts to look away from the camera making it obvious that its cut and placed together.
4. Record the second location for the chorus to make it more entertaining as the choruses get longer and slightly boring.

I Feel that if I improve these things my video will be finished and I can think about making my Website and Digipak.